Rewrite of the Jodeci song, All My Life
I pray I never find another lover
As bitter as you
Bitter as you
And I pray that I will never find another lover
As jealous as you
Jealous as you
Boy, you got too damn close to me
Made me start to smother
Too damn close to me
Tried to control
Like you were my father
Too damn close to me
On my skin like a blister
Too damn close to me
You really have become such a bother
You won't let me talk to any other
And for that
This farewell song I must sing
Just got to get you out of my life
Cause I never prayed for someone like you
And I can't believe God
Would let me
Let me end up with someone like you
And so I got to get you out of my life
Cause I never prayed for anyone like you
And I hope one day you will understand
Why I feel as I do
Yes, I pray no longer with my heart
You will screw
I really hope
You're getting this message, baby
Cause I mean it when I say
Never again will I fall in love
With a cheater and a liar like you
You're the mistake I'm thinking of
And so I scream at the dark lord above
For sending me your twisted love
Pray someday you will perish....
2019 Ramona Thompson
I do hope that you have got rid of him in a peaceful way. This is after all a lovely poem, well worded and excellently rendered. BUT heart wrenching. I like the spontaneous nature the poem is built up. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day. A 10 Full Score and much much more. Success I wish you in meeting the right boy-friend, some foreign blend.
oh love is bleeding here fear lives in fair! ! ! no room in heart for the cheater before God no prayer............////
Ramona, A very hurtful poem. may you find peace and happiness in your life.
Denouncing the over possessiveness and deceitful behavior of lover, throwing him out of life. Great message. Congrats on poem of the Day.
To pray that someone will perish shows a cruel and vicious heart, a little too much evil here for me I'm afraid
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
An insightful rendition from the heart. A very passionate composition with strong emotions. Thanks for sharing, Ramona.