Walking in the light
The sun shines bright
Knowing in my heart that this is right
I still keep walking, walking, walking
Walking away from you
Walking away from me
Running away from us
Mixed emotions in my head
Wanna turn back but I still keep walking
Head up in the sky
No questions
No asking why
I'm flying high
I'm leaving with no good byes
Smiling, I made the right choice
But I still hear your voice running in my head
I am not taking back what I said
I have to keep walking, running, escaping...from you
You lied
I cried
I was hurting dead inside
Trying so hard to show my pride
It's hard with tears in your eyes
'Be strong' they say
'Don't be weak'
People cry not because they are weak
It's because they have been strong for too long
A new me starting over
I've landed on my 4-leaf clover
Best of luck you'll always be in my heart
But right now I need a new start to finish my end
Laugh more
Smile more
Saying Amen!
You were a great friend
Now it's time for my heart to mend...
Wandering thoughts of 'mixed emotions' beautifully expressed in the poem. 'I have to keep walking, running, escaping...from you' - These words eloquently describe your state of mind. 'People cry not because they are weak It's because they have been strong for too long' - Well said! So deeply felt! 'You were a great friend Now it's time for my heart to mend... ' - A touching acknowledgement. This poem deserves 10/10 from me. So have I given it.
Simplicity is the style and quality of your poem, the way you start and end the poem is praise worthy, you are really a talented one, your wording and the poetical diction is properly appropriate, the flow of the poem is like a gushing water, and blowing like a wind making a sound soothing to soul and storming the brain, and very musical to ears, I wish I had written this poem….the theme is original and the poem is well crafted and well composed poem those qualities made the poem a everlasting a piece of fine art…I like poem very much and I will also like you thoughtful on my poems, especially ‘’I want to die’’
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A sublime start with a nice poem, Naomi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.