January Rains Poem by Phil J Hambling
January Rains
Nobody can notice your tears
In the bite of the January rains
They merge in salty stings
And into one long stream of memories
Umbrella fights your hand
Unruly and restless in the teasing winds
And blown inside out like your heart
The struggle commemorates the days you shared on this path of laughter and sun
And the suck and cast of the sea
Is now your only companion
As you battle on and on
Back home again
To the warmth of tea
And quiet reminiscence
As promised, here is my comment: fascinating poem about the harshness of the January rains. Most deserving as TMPOTD (The Member Poem Of The Day) CONGRATS andTop Marks!
thy tears merged into the stream of January rains; beautiful to read; nice affectionate feelings; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
I'm glad you received Poem of the Day and that I read your poem again. This time the first three lines drew me in and I've read them repeatedly with awe toward their significance.
Congratulations, Phil. Today this marvellous poem is selected as the POD Members. A most deserving recognition, dear poet. And POD is a wonderful occasion for a revisit. Enjoyed reading once again, Phil. Thank you and thank you, PoemHunter
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I would like to translate this poem
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2. Wondered how " They merge in salty stings And into one long stream of memories " My heart has gone with your muse, just jumped out of my rib-cage. Loved it, dear poet.5*s
Thank you and best wishes