I like it. It is almost a Haiku. Switch those last two llines around and it would be a perfect 7-5-7 syllable haiku. iIt even has the required seasonal theam. Please read mine and also read - Frost Flowers - Very few people know to what I am referring but I have a feeling that you will get it.
Adeline
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I like it. It is almost a Haiku. Switch those last two llines around and it would be a perfect 7-5-7 syllable haiku. iIt even has the required seasonal theam. Please read mine and also read - Frost Flowers - Very few people know to what I am referring but I have a feeling that you will get it. Adeline