hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 52,941 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Journey On Ship - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Hollow lives
Forcefully to live
And believe
In its worth to live

I am tired
Of being admired
Lies received in abundance
Makes me sad at once

I can’t disappear
Or hide and go in rear
I have to face
And follow the chase

I am part
Can not easily depart
From established customs
That has been done seldom

I may go slowly
Smile to keep and behave gently
I should not treated as different sheep
“Life is battle with journey on ship”


Comments about Journey On Ship by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/6/2013 10:07:00 PM)

    very well done


    Roland 'KingShip' Ediare1 minute ago
    A true disciple of hope...This poem portrays hope and resilience.
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  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/6/2013 10:07:00 PM)

    Again, I am sorry


    Michelle Mattes1 minute ago
    Hard to read.
    Comment 1 Comment+1


    Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago
    have positive views to pic from negative views (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 52,941 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/6/2013 10:01:00 PM)

    Hollow lives
    Forcefully to live (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, September 6, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, September 9, 2013


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