Just Deliver This Poem by Drake Kinkaid

Just Deliver This



Stop thinking this and just deliver it
Show why this face should be embeded in our histories pages
Show the pay of my wages
Walk with me through the world of my thinking
You see the moving of my words meaning
Most think I'm always just dreaming
Only ideas I'm just singing
But its really our truth that I'm bringing
I keep trying to let you in..
Still left dumbfounded, I just try it over again
Take your mind for a spin
All there is now are more words to be written
More precise teaching...
I'm putting this down, but your minds don't seem to be reaching

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
*Trusting You* 16 November 2008

Walk with me through the world of my thinking I love that line great job. You are a really great writer Drake and if people are not reading you on here then that is their loss I love your work just give it time they will find you. Becca

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Lisa Bray 14 November 2008

lol ill keep thinking if u keep trying lol well hmmm lol i loved it!

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Chocolate Bunny 07 November 2008

very good. Something to think about. I enjoyed it.

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