he hears when you call
from the first morning light
he hears your voice
a hero from victorious fight...
in a battle where knights come with swords
you're among of those who comes late
yours is not to fight but to write
the unending claims of historical rights...
a man in black sat on his chair
to balance the figure of both the arm and the chair
who are you to judge? ...who wants to dare?
both were given a chance to be fair..
let justice be a friend
let it live in your heart
let no subordinates be faked
for their superior's sake..
There's a nice balance to this wonderfully penned piece my friend...you have done well....and the justice proud...10
:) Very good I love how it sounds and the way you say it makes you think. Thumbs up from me! Keep writing.
An interesting and well written poem, Lady Grace. I enjoyed reading it. Carl.
let justice be a friend let it live in your heart let no subordinates be faked for their superior's sake..............let there be no discrimiationfor their worthshow on the field......very good narration inthr for m of tale.....10 rad mine disparity
I like how you started the story with a historical feel and brought it to the present with skill full creativity. Thank you for sharing :)
I really enjoyed the story behind it and i love the way you write. It's simple yet powerful. Im still trying to write that way. Anyways, this poem rocks, i mean it was really great! ~Izzzzzy~
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
let their subordinates never suffer........ fantastic write.........