lady grace


A simple promise


the life of my soul is you
and the breath that i take...

as we walk the aisle of joy
cross the bridges of emptiness..

you are the man of my dreams
the man who always love me
you are the truth from heaven
wakes the sleeping 'me'..

don't ever close your eyes
while staring at the sky
might you'll miss the moonshine
as witness for our love tonight...

i love you, i love you so much
no one can take your place in my heart
have you seen the falling star?
it's an omen from heaven, sign of a good start...

feel my heart...i am yours
feel my lips...it's all yours
feel the warmth of my love
it will never break your heart..

Submitted: Saturday, May 30, 2009
Edited: Sunday, January 24, 2010

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  • Rookie - 724 Points Antonio Liao (1/25/2010 6:33:00 PM)

    Seems a promise of Eternity....as you hear the melodies of the mountain....
    the pendulum of the clock to breath....for such love, hibernate the hearted
    soul of immortal journey...so sweet my dear friend... God bless....a 10 +++ (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 19,696 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (9/3/2009 6:45:00 AM)

    the life of my soul is you
    and the breath that i take...

    as we walk the aisle of joy
    cross the bridges of emptiness....what animagination and promise and surity that withyou the emptiness goes with you.. i loved the stanza and lines.....10

    read mine mary to marry...anywhere....come home...home bound (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kristina B; Williams (7/5/2009 2:12:00 PM)

    stunning, and swear like ive said, like 60 times before, as well as giving you 20 well deserved 10, my friend, are you sure we didnt date the same man, and or if not have the same relationship...lmao (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Howard Kern (6/19/2009 10:23:00 PM)

    The man you speak of is a truely blessed man, and lucky to have a lady shuch as you! ! ! .
    keep coming with the love, GOD knows we need more of it in the world today! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ch J Satyananda Kumar (6/16/2009 1:03:00 AM)

    don't ever close your eyes
    while staring at the sky
    might you'll miss the moonshine
    as witness for our love tonight... ....... Great lines. A great poem of sincere girl knee deep in love. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 37 Points Rafique Farooqi (6/15/2009 1:39:00 AM)

    GRACE you touch the soul with your gentle and luke warm hands.......and delicacy of the soul sooths you and reader at every step.....love your writes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (6/13/2009 6:55:00 AM)

    feel my heart...i am yours
    feel my lips...t's all yours
    feel the warmth of my love
    it will never break your heart..
    heartfelt and sweet romantic stanza.. poem is good and well written from the core of heart with loving mood.. well done.10++++++ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (6/6/2009 2:08:00 AM)

    How much I would love God to grant me the opportunity to find a Lady like you in my life...there will not be any more pain, sorrows, tears and and heartbreaking feelings...just happiness...God Bless you and keep the good work....love, Romeo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 125 Points Romeo Della Valle (6/6/2009 2:06:00 AM)

    How much I would love God to grant me the opportunity to find a Lady like you in my life...there will not be any more pain, sorrows, tears and and heartbreaking feelings...just happiness...God Bless you and keep the good work....love, Romeo (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Afzal Shauq (6/5/2009 1:38:00 AM)

    feel my heart...i am yours
    feel my lips...t's all yours
    feel the warmth of my love
    it will never break your heart..
    a lovely poem..melodious..rich idea and well written.. liked it.. and appreciate your way of writing and your vision.. romantic enough...10+++++++++ (Report) Reply

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