Just One Smile! Poem by Marissa Dunken

Just One Smile!

Rating: 5.0


Make these scars bleed,
Make my heart burst into tears.
Look at the pain you have caused!
I wish I could go back and save my soul;
But I would have never made these scars if it wasn't for you!
I can run my finger tips over them and relive every lil beat of this scar!
I wish I could forget these, forget who I am wish these scars!
But for I am a better person.
Made of metal, that can be melted with just one smile!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mohammad Akmal Nazir 19 July 2011

It was a wonderful poem composed with great skill. Fine imagery. Conratulations! Keep it up. I rated it 10. Thanks for sharing..... Please read and rate my poem 'A world of treason' on page 4. Thanks in advance. Warmest regards Akmal

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