Just when i found myself soaring
All the strings that held me up were cut
I fell back to earth
my breath knocked out of me
And I'm not sure if i'm strong enough
to take the next breath
i agree witht he last poet but i still like eaither ways of reading it: D
Lauren, You could eliminate lines 2 and 6 and have a very smooth reading poem without cliche or the obvious. Keep writing. SAS
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I would like to translate this poem
Just when i found myself soaring All the strings that held me up were cut I fell back to earth my breath knocked out of me And I'm not sure if i'm strong enough to take the next breath sweet and meaningful..hmm yeah 10/10