Build me up
Tear me down
Say you love me
Think I cheat on you... F*** NO! ! !
I wanted to marry you
I saw something in you
I still do
I love you
Truly I still do
But I hope this guy was worth it
Now I'm pissed
Honestly if killing wern't illegal
WTF! ! !
An outburst of love failure...........a disease.........like a heart failure.Kool piece Matthew.
wow...does that make you even more angry or does it calm you down to write about this......to me its good for someone that would like to releive pain and be calm but yeah im not going to judge what other people kno cuz its not my place, but keep writing.
First place calm down. take a couple of deep breaths and hug yourself and say to yourself I love me. Life is full of disappointments that we learn to survive and life is full of happy moments that we learn to relive and hang on to.You are very young and I know what it is like to be betrayed but you have many good years ahead of you and when God closes a window another one opens.Somethings are not meant to be-but there is always something better ahead of you.God bless you and thank you for serving our country.
wow hun...i feel the anger...plz keep writing...u got friends here for u if u ever need anything...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Like everybody else here, stay calm and it's good you have 'written' your anger. Life is not a bed of roses all the time, sometimes we have to undergo pain in order to achieve something more meaningful. Like your style, keep it up.