Knocking This Evening Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

death is truth of birth.... evening...dasl..day...evening.....the life circle... beautiful verse.....the words comes to the poet so spontaneously as rains from the sky... thanks for sharing.

Time and Death, two topics of the poem, yet in essence all the same. As we know in Sanskrit kaala means time, and it also means death, both at the core mean the same thing. Time sees to it that everything gets destroyed and die in time. A prayerful piece as always, dear poet..

Fine personification, 'Dusk welcomes night' the evening is knocking on the door like a person too. Sometimes I have been woken up by someone knocking on the door, like a line in your poem. Inspiring.

''Life is like this only Death is truth of birth.'' - In these two verses is the very circle of life and death. Wonderfully composed!

Life and death is cycle, life brought us in this world and death will carryy us somewhere. Neither we could stop our birth nor we can stop our death. The only thing we can do are the praters.

Dusk welcomes night! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.