hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 55,490 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Lack Basis - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Believe in what you are
But do not go far
Away from people around
As you failed to find ground

Do not send proud signals
That shall show your dismal show
It may prove nothing
But self fallacy as something

No one goes on showing what he or she is
It is like humble trees
Where you find cool shade
That greatness should never fade

Where will tree go and prove?
Everybody may laugh and disprove
It is such greatness that needs no proof
Think of such thing when you are aloof

Neither life can be ascertained
Nor the stand can be maintained
If life is spent for self alone
It is better to remain in isolation as lone

No one shall beat drum in praise
As it shall be construed as mad chase
You may have music
But that shall lack basis


Comments about Lack Basis by hasmukh amathalal

  • Rookie - 45 Points Colleen Courtney (6/7/2014 9:18:00 AM)

    Lots of deep meaning conveyed through this write. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/7/2014 2:50:00 AM)

    its about lacking stability


    Kameron WillisLess than a minute ago
    I think you should add more feeling and emotion.
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/7/2014 2:49:00 AM)

    kind of scattered

    Malishia StinnettLess than a minute ago
    Some of the word choices didn't make sense and there were parts that opposed itself in the same sentence but good message (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 37,242 Points Gajanan Mishra (6/7/2014 2:41:00 AM)

    lack basis, I like it sir.
    beating drum in praise - no use. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 55,490 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (6/7/2014 2:40:00 AM)

    Believe in what you are
    But do not go far (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, June 7, 2014



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