David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

Ladies Complain

The Men go out and Hunt for Food
Women stay home and make there Brood
Then the men come back in a good Mood
Only to get, both ears Chewed! !

So then things Change, and the women hunt for a Meal
And all their men stay home and Invent the Wheel
Then the women come back with the Food
To find there men in a real good Mood

So either way the women will Complain
About men's cocks and having no Brains
Maybe someday this will all End
And all women will be our best Friend

Submitted: Monday, February 13, 2006
Edited: Monday, February 13, 2006

Do you like this poem?
2 person liked.
0 person did not like.


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Comments about this poem (Ladies Complain by David Darbyshire )

  • Rookie Jessy Sanchez (2/28/2008 4:59:00 PM)

    your poem is good i guess (Report) Reply

  • Rookie kAy BaRCeLon (8/16/2007 6:50:00 PM)

    REALLY! ? ! ? ! ? !

    Most men complain more than women do... Dave! ! !

    ooopppppssss sorry men whine! ! ! hahaha (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Dee Daffodil (4/25/2006 5:26:00 AM)

    Careful David...you almost sound like you belong in the 'He-Man Women Hater's Club'! ! (LOL) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 200 Points Ernestine Northover (3/13/2006 2:36:00 PM)

    I don't know if men could hunt for food now somehow, I think they've lost a lot of their animal hunting instincts, everything is 'ready made' meals now, and I'm not a complainer really, I'll put up with most things that are thrown at me, even the male ego won't get too inflated if I have my way. Ha! Ha! Nice write. Love Ernestine XXX (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Gina Onyemaechi (2/13/2006 4:02:00 PM)

    An end to our nagging? Dream on, darling, dream on! ! : -) Luv, Gina XXX. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patricia Gale (2/13/2006 4:24:00 AM)

    Do you think either shall stop the complaining, ever? HAHA
    Cute write.

    Patricia (Report) Reply

  • Rookie David Darbyshire (2/13/2006 3:32:00 AM)

    Ok Tai THX dave xxxx Their their now (Report) Reply

  • Rookie ***** ********* (2/13/2006 3:30:00 AM)

    You need to change 'then, to their men' in line 6, otherwise I like it. 9 from picky bitch Tai (Report) Reply

Read all 8 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  4. Invictus, William Ernest Henley
  5. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  6. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  7. If, Rudyard Kipling
  8. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. Caged Bird, Maya Angelou
  10. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
[Hata Bildir]