Last Dance! Poem by (William) ( Rain Mountain)
Last Dance!
One last dance.
It is you i crave.
Miss brown, .
Take the pain away!
Take away my sorrows!
Take away my soul.....
Show you love me
before I go...
I have a new outfit.....to wear!
Loaded just for you!
For are last dance!
For are painful abuse!
The pain of life.
just wishing for death!
You have the power!
To take my last breath!
To stop my hart!
To stop the ache!
With one last dance.
She will go away!
My daughter would never see,
The man I have become.
The sick alcoholic, loser, dope fend dad......!
You understand me,
understand my pain!
When you are in my arm,
I no longer ache!
The life I had
the life I tossed!
Just a little prick,
and you are all I want!
That one last dance,
To take me to god! ! !
Take me to heaven
and off of this rock!
No one would miss me!
No one would care!
There life would be better!
If I was not there!
So come dance with me,
take me away,
from this life of pain........!
Hey its me, Roach's girlfriend... I loved this one. Im going to post a similar one so maybe your can read it. Its a little more explicit and not as creatively allegorical as yours. I feel your heart in this one. But i still want more of it...
Wow that was great, it makes me think about my brother, RIP Chris
nice peice, great expression of how we feel. you may be interested in reading my poem junkie, my words
hey rain mountain.god help us all.save the last dance for the best.all the best to you pal.emotional write you got there.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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I found this piece to be much clearer. Ther message was presented in a clever way. Demonstrating creativity. I recommend this piece.