Last Request Poem by Aiden Florence

Last Request



My heart is broken
It cannot be undone

I still love you
Yet that is not enough

My thoughts are impared
It cannot be changed

This affection I feel for you
Will always be the same

With such beautiful passion
I fall to the ground

My emotions are dead
I will never love again

Yet it matters not
When true love is dead anyway

I don't want to live
There is no hope

The scars in my heart
They will never heal

It is only liberation
That I ever hope to attain

So Kill me now
While you have the chance

Grant me this final wish
So I can rest in peace

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lilly Mandrell 12 May 2009

I like it. The cuplets work grate. Its really really good. I like the part about the scars on your heart. Thats so relatable. Good Job.: ]

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