Last Smile Poem by Rianda Sulistyaningrum

Last Smile

Rating: 5.0


staring the night
thinking of how far the distance
that appears between YOU and ME

trying to find out what the reason,
make you start to ignoring me,
didn't notice me,
even let me left behind...

we, both surronding by old friends,
greet and talk..
looks like nothing happen
showing them the other lie..

till come the day,
that I have to leave
far away from you, my love.

no hug, nor kiss.
even a single word.
in that farewell, I want to look into your eyes, deeply.
trying to see through your heart but, I can't!
It's just too hard!
because I leave you by my own..

in the freeze time,
you stare at me.
give me your last smile,
and I force myself not to burst in tears...

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajaram Ramachandran 24 July 2009

The parting moments of true friends are like what you have written here.

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 17 July 2009

A sad goodbye. Tears and smile both perishing in a moment of separation.............10.

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Marieta Maglas 17 July 2009

''till come the day, that I have to leave far away from you, my love.'' nice lyric poem, lovely to read.........10

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