SALINI NAIR

Bronze Star - 5,818 Points (2/2/1981 / kottayam)

Law of fences


This is the woods I know
It was dense, now lean
Its limits are patented
Still charm clogged in borders

Theme of ocean is incredible
These tides are reflective
Beyond the edges it's a breach
Still charm clogged in borders

This sky is mesmeric
Its borders are gigantic
Hatching fringe is absurd
Still charm clogged in borders

Mind is just a cremation
Invisible and mystic
There sows the seeds of barriers
Still charm clogged in borders

Nature lure all to thee
She garb with the desire of mighty
All treasures are his bequest
No choice to break his rules

Who dare to fence it down?
Love can wipe out all these fences
Rest of the fence remain in you
Wipe it at least for today's feast ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Submitted: Sunday, August 03, 2014

Topic of this poem: diversity


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  • Bronze Star - 5,319 Points Geetha Jayakumar (8/3/2014 10:20:00 AM)

    Thoughtful poem with great meaning in it. Very true said in lines..Still charm clogged in borders.
    Everything in nature is fenced...Yes, everything comes in restriction.
    concluding lines are very beautiful and positive too..
    Love can wipe out all these fences
    Rest of the fence remain in you
    Wipe it at least for today's feast! ! ! Yes, Love has that power it can break any fence....Loved it. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 3,543 Points Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/3/2014 6:51:00 AM)

    All the fences are visited developing the law in conclusion. Love has no fences it can remove those existing. Beautiful poem. Thank you. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 13,276 Points Deepak Kumar Pattanayak (8/3/2014 4:41:00 AM)

    Very insightful........and we know the limitation of all things choked up by universal laws that could be broken by
    love only...........nice concept nicely (Report) Reply

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