Laziness - A Curse Poem by Sanket Jain

Laziness - A Curse

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Of all vice in the world under discipline
Laziness - a Curse - is like a Saccharin.
Sweet as pipe, sonorous as violin
Wicked as a snake, ill-mannered as Bedouin;
Laziness creeps in secretly body within
And remains there undisturbed and akin.
It is seen when duty or slog does spin
Grinds us till in others found Lenin.
But that is a bad time as made us thin.
Hence precaution must be taken, O Kin!
Laziness, a Bad King, should not reign
Over us from beginning to let out jinn.
Of all vice in the world under discipline
Laziness - a Curse - is like a Saccharin.

Friday, October 6, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: monorhyme
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Akhtar Jawad 06 October 2017

A great poem on laziness, I liked the thoughts, I liked the flow of lines and the worlds and I liked the poet's style of writing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 06 October 2017

Like other vices laziness is also a vice. This is a curse. We need wisdom to understand life and we need to work hard to get success. An amazing and brilliantly penned perceptional poem is shared here...10

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Gajanan Mishra 06 October 2017

all vice under discipline, good one

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