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Theodora (Theo) Onken

(Washington State)

Leader Of The Pack ~

So secure she is with her information
For it was garnered while on the road
Inching her creepy way into: 'Almost Sure'
She switches into a sure-fired advise mode.

Her use of the written word is quite impressive
You see her informative writes have been few
Jaunting - here - there and everywhere there's a showing
Left her little time for other things she needed to do.

Aww - but the contacts she made were very limited in knowledge
Her not having all the necessary info - is good for us
Now, we 'SIT' silently and await their ACTIONS -
Never dropping our guard - is simply a must.

Counting the hours and days ahead with favor
Knowing that we have succeeded in keeping her in the dark
She splashes out her advise - willy - nilly this day
So cock - sure - that they will get their marks.

By, Theodora Onken
December 16,2013

Just another write about the illegal rings that operate
Around the world - their world of drugs -
Like cocaine, marijuanna, and meth.

Two of the three drugs above alter personalites for the
Worse and kill many people. Heart attack and stroke come
From using coke or meth just once sometimes. Have had
These drugs slipped to me - without my knowledge and had
A silent heart attack as a result. Truly believe that
Our world would be a better place if we could stop this
Crazy trade. The world has really changed since coke and
Meth abuse has risen. The drugs stimulate the area of the
Brain - the violence center - that i believe may be
Responsible for the outbreak of our massive violent crime.
This is not to say that the use of certain psychiatric drugs
Do not do the same because they do - like Adderall for ADD.

Submitted: Monday, December 16, 2013
Edited: Tuesday, December 17, 2013

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This story is about a crime ring and the messages they get to one another one way or the other.

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  • Theodora Onken (12/21/2013)

    Patricia, Thank you! Glad you could feel my intense feelings; Tell you my life would make for an interesting movie. The things that have happened to me ARE unbelievable; Just fortunate that i woke up and realized everything when i did. I owe a lot to certain Dr.'s and of course different forms of Law Enforcement. Am really hoping that my message is heard - as i know that i am not the only victim in this greedy/ oft' evil world. There are but a few things i am passionate about - the drug trade is one - also, the victimization of innocent people for profit or gain. At least the FACTS are in the correct we wait. (Report) Reply

  • Patricia Grantham (12/20/2013 11:17:00 AM)

    A very informative and detailed write. A poem written with such
    force and conviction. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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