David Darbyshire

Rookie (6/11/54 / Darwen England)

Let it Out


If you are your own prisoner
jailed inside yourself
feeling like an old Miser
is not so good for your health

So when your in your Shell
you really should Yell,
whoop, holler and shout
Just to let it out

With this big release
you will feel at peace
and also feel swell
cause you have cracked your shell

Submitted: Tuesday, May 09, 2006
Edited: Tuesday, May 09, 2006

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  • Rookie Danny Reynolds (5/9/2006 4:40:00 AM)

    To be taken taken twice a day,
    usually in the car with or without accompaniment.
    Clear the lungs, air and mind in one fells whoop.
    Danny (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Patricia Gale (5/9/2006 4:29:00 AM)

    AAAAAAHHHX#$! @*! Ok I feel better thanks for the advice! lol
    Nice write Dave.

    Hugs
    Patricia (Report) Reply

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