sagar patil.

Rookie - 2 Points (03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

Let Me Bear Some Pain - Poem by sagar patil.

let me bear some pain..
let me remain alive from within
my eye will turn dull
let some tears fall

i have smile on lips
eye in wetness and
the ground of my heart
somewhat wet i have
everything today...
but still i cant overcome ur absence
at least in my sleep
in dreams
let me sleep in your arms

let me bear some pain..
let me remain alive from within
my eye will turn dull
let some tears fall

your face, you grace
your talks, yours feelings
the beautiful moment that
i had spend with you
& the morning & evening
let them be mine for sometime
my love!


Poet's Notes about The Poem

i fall in depression

Comments about Let Me Bear Some Pain by sagar patil.

  • Bronze Star - 2,412 Points Paul Brookes (5/10/2013 10:54:00 AM)

    A beautiful poem full of emotion and warmth through the pain. You have a gift enabling you to communicate true feeling. Thanks for sharing BB : O) (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 321 Points Poetheart Morgan (8/24/2012 7:56:00 AM)

    Such pain! ! ! Oh! ! ! Beautiful! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 7,678 Points Neela Nath (8/22/2012 11:34:00 AM)

    Very romantic, heart-touching poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Rupika Alekhya (8/22/2012 11:22:00 AM)

    Very nice poem.
    Way to go. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 22, 2012



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