Treasure Island

sagar patil.

(03/06/1990 / maharashtra, india)

Wherever I Am


wherever i am
no matter where i am
your memories are always with me
should i tell someone
or not
whats in my heart,
thought it may seem that
the whole world is with me,
but still hidden from everybody
loneliness lives in my heart
i have only your
memories with me.

some people place a stake
of memories in their heart
while other cant recount
their memories perfectly,
some people remain happy
living in present.
while other night get everything
but in their heart they still say;

some people have the roots of
the past in their hearts
while for other relationships
break with sepration
some people keep space for
new experience in their heart
while other keep the lamp
of memories on their eyelashes

whats in my heart,
thought it may seem that
the whole world is with me,
but still hidden from everybody
loneliness lives in my heart
i have only your
memories with me...

Submitted: Thursday, October 18, 2012
Edited: Friday, October 19, 2012

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  • Jiya 123 (10/29/2012 5:08:00 AM)

    the last stanza of the poem is really nice and well framed...
    Bon Efforts...Keep writing... :) (Report) Reply

  • Unwritten Soul (10/21/2012 10:40:00 AM)

    One of your nice poem, it mixed with two poles of emotions and feelings. keep it up your words, poet! _Soul (Report) Reply

  • Romeo Della Valle (10/21/2012 12:50:00 AM)

    Like I said before, I have been there many times and I survived! Very touching and deep! Honest feelings nicely flowing in this well penned write! Check some of my recent posted poems and for sure you will clearly see that I gone through this situation and I know that it hurts! You young and strong and you too, will survive and one morning you will look at the mirror and laugh and guess what? The mirror will laugh along with you! You will find happiness again! 10+++ Keep it up! God Bless You! Romeo-New York City (Report) Reply

  • Neela Nath (10/20/2012 8:24:00 AM)

    Sorrow is so profound can't be dug, only can be felt alone and alone. Thanks for sharing your grief in form of poem. (Report) Reply

  • Vipins Puthooran (10/19/2012 3:32:00 PM)

    the whole world is with me,
    but still hidden from everybody
    loneliness lives in my heart///////
    Beautiful line! ! ! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Thomas A Robinson (10/18/2012 2:06:00 PM)

    effective, everyone's memories are ss different as their are people.
    But I feel all have a sense of bittersweetness when it comes to memories. (Report) Reply

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