Claude Davis III

Rookie (10/12/1989)

Let's Take A Walk


Let's take a walk
We can go back down to the stream
We'll be able to talk
Like how our future together will seem

We can have some fun
While we are down there by the creak
It'll be hard to have none
Seeing you've been gone for about a week

We can retake our old walk
The one walk where it was just you and me
Had more fun then we talked
All we'll need is a blanket under a big tree

Submitted: Sunday, July 01, 2007
Edited: Friday, March 18, 2011

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  • Rookie RyuOh Kenshin (7/1/2007 8:19:00 PM)

    ur like the rhyming king. I love the last two lines. Also I have read other poem they r good 2. (Report) Reply

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