Letting My Heart Bleed Poem by Sangay Phuntsho

Letting My Heart Bleed



Your face beat the beauty of moon,
I said,
But she blushed like a loon,
Letting my heart bleed.

Your lips beat the beauty of rose,
I said,
But she stared with a pose,
Letting my heart bleed.

Your eyes beat the beauty of pearl,
I said,
But she prepared herself a curl,
Letting my heart bleed.

Your voice beat the beauty of song,
I said,
But she cried like a gong,
Letting my heart bleed.

Your hair beat the beauty of breeze,
I said,
But she made her final pleas,
Letting my heart bleed.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dechen Lhamo 29 April 2013

your poem beat the bird's sweetest melody, i say, not for the sake of comedy, letting my heart beat, for more poems with curiosity heat..........nice piece huh!

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