Liberty means freedom from captivity
Independently one can do within rules
Be sure liberty is the abode of happiness
Eagerness in wisdom is liberty too
Righteous work you do and enjoy liberty
Torture never to anybody, bring peace
You will be a deity if you have virtues.
Date & Time: 8/31/2017 1: 00: 00 PM Muzahidul Reza (8/31/2017 1: 00: 00 PM) Wrote review on this poem: : : Be sure liberty is the abode of happiness, great write on liberty. (Essence of his review)
Virtue! Positiveness! ! To bring peace to the World. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
I like the poem, and I will have to try my hand at this style of writing. Thanks for posting and introduction to this style of poem
THIS IS PAGE 3: These are kinds of invisible conquering great parts of the world, again no Liberty for mankind. BUT you wrote a wondrous Acrostic as I said on prime here. when I started. I am accustomed to read your (at the least) five stanzas poetry, and this is a seven-liner poem. But you still excell in this. My two thumbs up, Sir! I have enjoyed and appreciated most your words full of wisdom. A 10 for the Vote and much-much more.
THIS IS PAGE 2: Out of our sight, out of our ears, there is still slavery, de l'exploitation de l'homme par l'homme as our President constantly said, at that moment about the communist party and the communists which were invading my beautiful homeland.
I must shortened my comment as PH advised me, aha between the 30-500 words. Can anyone explain? This is PAGE ONE: Wondrous Acrostic, my well meant compliments, Mr. Mahakul. BUT Liberty do not always mean freedom from captivity. How many people are deprived of this subject?
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very wise poem, liberty must have rules within, only peace makes true freedom, no torture to anyone, Full makes for this poem with true wisdom.