~ Lie Sly ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ Lie Sly ~

Rating: 4.7


~ LIE SLY ~
Ms. Nivedita …
UK
15.10.09.


Life-Hype
Hike-Strife
Pike- Knife
Strike-Slice.

To ply
To tie
Ne’er try
To die
E’er try.

Fie n’ Fie
Death is
Hi-fi
Goodbye hi
Welcome fie.

Love
To die
Else are
Lie Sly

Hue buy
Posthumously dye
Starry psychic sky.

Again why ask: Why?
Smilingly say: Bye bye.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr. V. Chakravorty 30 October 2009

Poet has the grit to say bye bye with a broad smile during final exit. Excellent word move like Queen of chase game. [Your poems Checkmate and Checkmate Again lol! ] Ten++ Dr. V

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 30 October 2009

Hue buy Posthumously dye Starry psychic sky. Again why ask: Why? Smilingly say: Bye bye............when it is certain and shot sure to come then why not acccept it smilingly and say bye bye..... lovely composition..how come you could do such beautiful creation.... i loved it and thanks for regards.....10 read mine.. never say die...welcome...visiting hell

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Carol Gall 28 November 2009

wow excellent really great write niv 10

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Luwi Habte 05 December 2009

well, this is well penned poem for real interesting piece luwi

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Luwi Habte 05 December 2009

well, this is well penned poem for real interesting piece luwi

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Miroslava Odalovic 15 October 2010

Happy catharsis hopefully to be reached by everyone :)

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I really like the way you present your poems..its unique..its interesting..loved it

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Sally Plumb Plumb 16 June 2010

Aye, aye. Which was the lie?

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Lynn Glover 26 May 2010

cleverly written poem with plenty of oomph. A Good write. Lynn

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Aldo Kraas 25 April 2010

I could see your personality in the poem. You like people that are confident like you. You speak your mind And you want people to speak their mind.

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