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Connor Whyte (March,30th,1993 / Montana)
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Lies
The eyes of A lier show no truth, The eyes of a good lier fools those who are blind.
Seeking the truth when the devils your story, Bidding you farewell and letting you commit the sin and burn in hell, Your alone living with the lie you tell that you will only believe, You made a grave mistake.
Tick the time and start it back you can't change what you have done, Malevolent and untruthful you seek justice but you have no one to run to.
Your hated in the eyes of your family you would be lucky if the devil even wanted you, Your alone and in distress living your lies you can't confess.
Whats done is done I will never believe you even as your son, When you die no one will show nothing but the devils crow, You lay in your casket as it caves in, Someone likes you the maggots love your flesh your the feast of something I like even more than you.
You have payed your dues to commit sin you never prayed for forgiveness God cares but he can't do anything for you, You chose your path and turned the wrong way, Life is to short and you made it
that way.
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I love the first paragraph most. You have your own way to poetry that defined you in some way. I can see you have so much more to share and form them to an art that's beautiful in those eyes that could understand your soul. Keep writing.
You are a magician.
Awesome poem, although the bad spelling and grammar detracts from its potency.
The sad cry from the member of a dysfunctional family, as one of the parents is the reason for creating such a havoc in the mind of this person. There are hundreds of thousands of families live such a life all over the world. Actually this kind of situation should not arise in another family, that is the reason I am writing poems on various social issues..Well written poem on Lies...My heart and prayers go to these people who suffer in silence!
You have a very beautiful style of writing and you express yourself so deeply in this poem, I like it!
So much hate and anger in this poem. I know life may be hard and we may not always agree with it but it's the way we look at it. If you see life with anger and hate then it's not gonna be pleasant at all.. But if you put the bad aside and see the good you may find that it's not all that bad. I really do like this poem though :) keep writting more :) can't wait to read your other poems :)
lies can be good and bad if you look at it from different perspectives.
Lies once discovered can have two side effects: One that would turns you angry and two: the one that would make you wiser. The first one is temporally and the second one is permanent. It seemed that you opted for the second one by writing this well crafted and poignant write! It is a thought provoking write that clearly shows your talent! Thank you for sharing! Keep it up! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo-: NYC
Very unique style of writing. Truthful Lie Poem. Nice.
Wow! There is truth in your poem which makes me to read it again and again as gain in truth. Honestly a worthy poem to read.....
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