Life, let it drift into the midsummer seas.
A meaningless, endless torture of the thy soul, blessed be.
Diverged in paths no man wished to foresee.
A sorrowful life awaits thee.
Life, beautiful yet painful, truthfully written.
By the one who bares all creation.
A purpose, is it not what thou seek?
But without a creator thou shall not reap.
Life, as they weep for their beloved.
A reminder of death, as it crawled.
Repent not, thy shall regret.
A punishment awaits. Haven? lost.
Life seeks just but does not pay.
A crime of passion sinfully displayed.
Now stupidity and idiocy goes unpaid.
But remember, haunting starts, anguish replays.
You reap what you sow. This is the irrefutable law of nature. Very well written with smooth transition from one verse to another. Keep up the good work. Good bless.
i liked reading it.. though the subject is kind of foreboding, but yes life does pay you back in the same coin... Very good indeed.
Great write, enjoyed every lines and its wise message! Keep writing...A great 10.
''But remember, haunting starts, anguish replays'' great poemo... keep on writing, i m looking forward reading more of your writings.. :)
Very deep and close to the heart, i see, i demand another poem! xD good job, this poem speaks for itself.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Rich and allusive.Trez bien!