Life On Rail Poem by Narayanan Nair. P Perunthanam

Life On Rail

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Dear, I fear of sin; I sense,
Open mouth in real repentance
By word or deed, if hurt you, please
Pardon by name of the Lord to ease.
Why you tell me you cannot hold
Never I tell that fail you hold
Repentance vents pent up tension
Pardon softens the hearts' friction.
You the rail frail, where we two rail
Your own terminal is my trail.
When with heavy load I move ahead
Under control your guidance red.
When you heave; or break in strain
I too feel hard lurching by crane.
So far straight you are, Oh! never
Creak my wheels at bending dear
Life is a leaf on stem you know
Rustling tender in breeze below.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Valsa George 25 February 2013

'Repentance vents pent up tension Pardon softens the hearts' friction'...... very meaningful lines! .

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Chandra Thiagarajan 24 January 2013

This is a nice rhythmic and rhyming poem.Loved it THANKS.

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Geetima Baruah Sarma 22 January 2013

Beautiful lines; enjoyed reading the poem.

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