Life's Experience's May Be Easily Drawn Upon. Poem by Michael Gale

Life's Experience's May Be Easily Drawn Upon.

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This verse...
Can be no worse.
This thought...
Can be put to book
And read'ly bought.
This line...
May be stately fine.
That arc...
Might meet an artistic spark.
A blank space...
T'was happend aft' life's errors.
Can only be drawn...
Upon and
To be erased...
By light's early dawn.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Zoe Smith 20 June 2006

Love this poem. These lines are great, 'T'was happend aft' life's errors. Can only be drawn... Upon and To be erased... By light's early dawn. They resonate especially deeply with me becaue my birth name is Dawn. Keep up the great work, and by the way, nice to see someone from good ole Chicago! Love that city. Had family there and the most special of memories. Cheers!

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SIR MICHAEL JEFFREY OF THE MISSING HUNTERS......VERY NICE WORK GOOD SIR...PRAYTELL, WHERE HAS THOU BEEN? HOPE ALL IS WELL...BEAM ME UP AS SOON AS YOU CAN''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FRANK

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This verse... is a fine one. No blank spaces in you MIchael! And yes, point well (very well) made... tomorrow is another day.

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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