Lifeless Poem by Michael Gale

Lifeless

Rating: 3.8


Darker and darker of life's emptiness.
Quickly and slowly all drains all till it's less.
Sharper and sharper and deeper it cuts.
Life is no longer a great bowl of cherries,
It's cold and lonely and quite so scary.
Failure and emptiness does extend,
Til finally and gratefully tis truly the end!


2005 Michael Jeffrey Gale

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MIKE...SHORT PIECE, BUT AN EXPOUNDING MESSAGE...GREAT WRITE... SOMETIMES BIEVITY IS MORE INPACTING IN ITS OWN MEASURE, BUT ONLY WHEN THOSE FEW WORDS COMMAND ATTENTION & INTEREST...YOURS DO! 10...''''''''FRANK

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MIKE...SHORT PIECE, BUT AN EXPOUNDING MESSAGE...GREAT WRITE... SOMETIMES BIEVITY IS MORE INPACTING IN ITS OWN MEASURE, BUT ONLY WHEN THOSE FEW WORDS COMMAND ATTENTION & INTEREST...YOURS DO! 10...''''''''FRANK

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Michael Gale

Michael Gale

Chicago Illinois/Oklahoma City.
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