Life Was Zero Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Life Was Zero

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Life was zero
But started with one
Went up the hill top
Journey remained non stop

It was all we could do as best
Now was the time to rest
Enjoy the fruit and spend the time
But where was the peace any time?

So far it has remained adventurous
Now it should not remain continuous
One must take deep breath and spread the leg
'So far life was successful' must bear the tag

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

Pratap Singh.. Excellent n Nice...! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! NEERAJ BHUSHAN BEAUTIFUL. ?? ? ?? danuta BEAUTIFUL, BEAUTIFUL *(*-*) *

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

Tere Lara THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR LOVELY WORDS IN POEMS!

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 August 2012

merlyn d life is a continuous struggle between good and evil but having good triumph in the end is a worthy fight

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Monoj O sir, Life wasn't Zero.................. good

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2012

Life was zero But started with one Went up the hill top Journey remained non stop

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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