Life's Mango - Nonet Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Life's Mango - Nonet

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Half rotten, the other side of the mango
had the lust in subconscious mind
part eaten by insects and birds
soon the smell will spread
making it unbearable
and passion to have
will be gone
pick your
mango
from the tree
a green mango
will be long standing
relationship though unripe
will last in their life's tree
craving for the sweetness in their love
savoring the fleshy sweetness of the mango

Thursday, January 28, 2021
Topic(s) of this poem: human life,philosophical
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Darren Jkoeryo 28 January 2021

DJ liked it, like the hidden pearl in a shell the love is sacred and should be done when very young and not rotten.

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Deepak S S 28 January 2021

Excellent poem, showing mirror to this life.

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Ricky Manhatten 28 January 2021

Now while eating mangos I will remember it.

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Mamta S 28 January 2021

Brilliant, simply superb poem.

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Poetic Sky 28 January 2021

Never thought about life this way. Brilliant philosophy.

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Suzon Albert 31 January 2021

Great piece adorable.

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Varsha M 28 January 2021

Let even insects birds and bats too enjoy the feast.

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Varsha M 28 January 2021

Hahaha. Stealing not good. Yes unripe mange with salt snd red chilli are awesome. But the ripe one has its own flavor.

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Kostas Lagos 28 January 2021

Brilliant interesting poem

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Shreya Hacks 28 January 2021

Philosophy at its best. Life like mango.

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