Like Boat Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Like Boat



I knew you could be
The best choice under tree
Where I could accompany you
To feel the happiness through

It was certainly new lease
With energy release
That earth has blossomed
And new relation is occasioned

I wish it to happen
For all of us even
It is life that teaches
And forces

Yes life is like boat
Where good or memories are meant to quote
We may feel pain or happiness
That shall certainly reflect on face

I can swim any river
Whether at odd or in favor
It will be great moment
To feel and live at present

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2014

Rohani Daud, Manish Kumar and Pinkijain Jain like this. Hasmukh Mehta welcome Just now · Unlike · 1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2014

nice Melissa QuistLess than a minute ago I liked the last three stanza's the best. Overall, well done.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2014

I can swim any river Michelle AngelLess than a minute ago this was written very well. Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 08 August 2014

I knew you could be The best choice under tree

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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