hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 44,557 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Like Boat - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

I knew you could be
The best choice under tree
Where I could accompany you
To feel the happiness through

It was certainly new lease
With energy release
That earth has blossomed
And new relation is occasioned

I wish it to happen
For all of us even
It is life that teaches
And forces

Yes life is like boat
Where good or memories are meant to quote
We may feel pain or happiness
That shall certainly reflect on face

I can swim any river
Whether at odd or in favor
It will be great moment
To feel and live at present


Comments about Like Boat by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 9:53:00 PM)

    Rohani Daud, Manish Kumar and Pinkijain Jain like this.

    Hasmukh Mehta welcome
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  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 7:21:00 PM)

    nice

    Melissa QuistLess than a minute ago
    I liked the last three stanza's the best. Overall, well done. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 7:20:00 PM)

    I can swim any river


    Michelle AngelLess than a minute ago
    this was written very well.
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,557 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (8/8/2014 2:56:00 AM)

    I knew you could be
    The best choice under tree (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, August 8, 2014



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