Like Distant Relatives Poem by Indira Renganathan

Like Distant Relatives

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Our beginning days
Were sweetly close and thick..
I used to feel the heavenly nectar
Lingering on my lips for long hours

But earth started losing
The lustre of its soil
For sadly a poor cultivation..
Money became your criteria

And as tilling and manuring
Didn't help to restore the soil
I was forced to be the symbol
Of frugality.Family weighed too heavy

Yet withal
Life has to change someday some way..it did
Today you in the porch dozing..I in the bed slumping
Like two distant relatives...
Age....reminiscing about those nectareous days

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kesav Venkat Easwaran 04 May 2023

The life, age and the relatioships. A write very much symbolic

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Dr Dillip K Swain 25 April 2023

An excellent poem! Change is the law of nature. I am different from what I was yesterday. Each passing day makes a difference. I sincerely appreciate the undeniable truth reflected in your poem, 'Life has to change someday some way'

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David Wood 24 April 2023

Life is a rich tapestry that displays the tree of life in our memories.

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Denis Mair 24 April 2023

That really hits home. Indeed, life has to change, but why this way? Such natural expression of a life stage, like listening to someone think instead of just reading words on paper.

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Bharati Nayak 24 April 2023

A beautiful take on changing life.

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