Like The Evening Moon Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Like The Evening Moon

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As the sun sets
and darkness falls
the evening moon rises
and fills our heart
with its soft light
is a reminder of life
a symbol of hope amidst strife.

Our dreams float in the sky,
peacefully like kites
In a quiet presence,
with a cosmic thrill.

Then who whispers secrets to us,
under the moon light
when silence is around,
and who tickle our soul
and sparkles it?

Like the moon,
we walk in phases,
at times, ups and sometimes downs,
who sets the maze of our lives?

O moon you are the true inspiration
as we must shine like you,
all the time no matter in which phase,
and in what shape through every step.

For even in the dark night,
you glow with all might,
with a constant reminder
to embrace the night.

Sunday, January 28, 2024
Topic(s) of this poem: moon,inspiration
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Nabakishore Dash 28 January 2024

Like the moon we walk---------- of our lives.Excellent comparison.

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Gordon Walter 28 January 2024

For even in the dark night, you glow with all might, with a constant reminder to embrace the night.

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Pallab Chaudhury 28 January 2024

Beautifully painted one... Well done my dear! With best wishes/ PC.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 29 January 2024

A beautiful tribute to the evening moon embellished with great images. Very inspiring.

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Terence Craddock 30 January 2024

there is a soft beautiful serene melody in this poem, I love the way the first stanza builds into the imagery, 'Our dreams float in the sky, peacefully like kites In a quiet presence, with a cosmic thrill.'

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Deepak S S 30 January 2024

We take inspiration from everythigh around us. Good poem.

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If the night moon can tickle and make our souls fly up to it let darkness embrace our skies

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Terence Craddock 29 January 2024

our dreams can bloom radiant bright like the full moon in full bloom bright, dreams are a sweet nectar which fill the soul with joy delight, wait feed hope energy to dreams to future glow full moon bright

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Terence Craddock 03 February 2024

I wrote the poems 'Dreams Can Bloom Radiant Bright' and 'Feed Hope Energy To Dreams', inspired by the poem 'Like The Evening Moon', by the poet M. Asim Nehal and dedicated to the poet M. Asim Nehal.

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LeeAnn Azzopardi 29 January 2024

Very beautiful Asim Bravo! ! ! !

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