John Carter Brown


Limerick 109 - Poem by John Carter Brown

There was a young model from Ealing
Bereft of all passionate feeling;
Her problem was this,
She just couldn't kiss,
As the gloss on her lips kept congealing.

(Written Jan 2013)


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Shame really - she was such a nice girl!

Comments about Limerick 109 by John Carter Brown

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (3/2/2013 8:50:00 AM)

    WOW! ! ! ! John, this is so lovely and cute! i am just laughing....wow..you are unique in writing limericks. (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 3,319 Points Smoky Hoss (2/26/2013 4:44:00 PM)

    I still/always love your sense of humor! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,021 Points Valerie Dohren (2/24/2013 7:09:00 AM)

    Sounds horrible John, gooey lips! ! On your way to 200! ! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, February 22, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, February 22, 2013


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