Danny Draper

Rookie - 347 Points (14 July 1963 / Kiama, New South Wales, Australia)

Limerick for discontinuous telephone reception


There.... was.... woman.... Cologne
.... tried.... make.... call.... her....,
But.... line.... disjointed.... broken
.... no.... really.... what.... spoken.


Danny Draper 21/10/2013

Submitted: Monday, October 21, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, October 23, 2013

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Comments about this poem (Limerick for discontinuous telephone reception by Danny Draper )

  • Gold Star - 7,450 Points Lyn Paul (12/11/2013 5:24:00 PM)

    Often on a mobile it is a really poor reception and there are broken words just like yours above. Thank you Danny (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,124 Points Kevin Patrick (11/10/2013 10:38:00 PM)

    Actually, I don't know what this means, but I love it! , although I'm not sure if this is syntax of semiotics (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,405 Points Diane Hine (10/22/2013 6:02:00 AM)

    Say whaaaaaaaaaat? ! (Report) Reply

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