Limerick- My Cat Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- My Cat

Rating: 5.0


I have a cat with fur as soft as silk
She always has an eye on my milk
A cutie, I love so much
Sometimes, she acts like a witch
Then I cannot but give her a hard kick!

Limerick- My Cat
Friday, November 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: cat,milk
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
10 syllables each in lines 1,2 and 5
7 syllables each in lines 3 and 4
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rose Marie Juan-austin 20 November 2020

A beautifully crafted limerick. Witty and full of images. Beautiful depiction and description of a lovely cat. Five Stars! !

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M Asim Nehal 21 November 2020

Ha ha.. love and hate relationship nicely put together in humorous way. Loved it.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 21 November 2020

Ha..ha..ha...ha..I could not stop smiling large reading this fun giving Limerick. A cat with fur had got the hard kick. This Limerick is very fun giving and it is excellently penned. An amazing sharing is done really! ..5 stars.

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Deluke Muwanigwa 21 November 2020

Lovely. I too have a cat. I used to kick her when my milk she lick. One day she killed a snake in my house now i treat her so sweet. She steals my meals i give her more fills.

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Varsha M 21 November 2020

Yes you described the cat so well. At times she do acts like a witch only to receive kick. Admirations ma'am.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2020

Enjoyed your limerick piece. To write a limerick one must have good sense of humor. You seem to have enough. Full rating

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Glen Kappy 17 December 2020

Writing limericks with my granddaughter I experienced how addictive they are. To get her started I wrote this one about her cat— She has a black kitten named Rocket who’s now much too big for her pocket. By the large kitty door he’s felled six birdies or more till she figured a way she could block it. As it turned out, she wrote two that day, and I wrote to more. What fun! Be well and blessed, Valsa. Glen

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 December 2020

A well penned poem...... Truly fantastic.....5 stars *****

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2020

so no share any milk instead of this do kick hungry cat won't be mad drink, you can fully drink!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 November 2020

TOP POETESS.... in the west PETS ARE LIKE CHILDREN SO... YOU CAN KNOW MORE ABOUT LIFE IF YOU READ MY LATEST ONE MOST READ A TRIBUTE TO FLASHY MY LOVELIEST PET

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