Limerick R32 (Hindi) Wonderful Ape / बनमानुस Poem by Rajnish Manga

Limerick R32 (Hindi) Wonderful Ape / बनमानुस

Rating: 5.0


There once was a wonderful ape.
Who gave up his skin for a cape.
Now he swings in the trees,
All exposed to the breeze,
Which leaves him in very bad shape.

(Name of the original writer not known)


एक समय की बात है जंगल में था बनमानुस;
कोट बनाने की खातिर बाल दे गया भलमानुस;
यहाँ वहाँ अब दौड़ रहा,
सरदी में हलकोड़ रहा,
इतनी खस्ता हालत में घटती जाती है आयुष.

(भावानुवाद/ रजनीश मंगा)

Tuesday, December 15, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: animal,misery,winter,aging
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 15 December 2015

Wonderful ape gives his skin for a cape is very amazing in this fun giving Limerick. All words are exposed to the breeze. Fantastic sharing done definitely. Wisely penned poem.10

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Kim Barney 15 December 2015

Very funny and done in true limerick style. Good job.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 15 December 2015

Very amusing limerick. Enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Jagdish Singh Ramána 06 May 2020

" भलमानुस" दरअसल वह भलामानुस ही था। मार्मिक! Great translation. I feel sad for the wise ape. It also exposes(shows) the poet a भला मानस(bhalâ mānûs) , man of lovely nature.

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Anjandev Roy 04 May 2020

Great Limerick. Enjoyed it. anjandev roy.

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Edward Kofi Louis 26 June 2016

Changes! With the muse of life. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Wes Vogler 09 January 2016

The limerick form is beyond reproach and the meter is perfect. You are writing limericks with confidence.

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M Asim Nehal 16 December 2015

Bahut badiya.....Maza aagaya...10

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Rajnish Manga

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Meerut / Now at Faridabad
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