Gone are the days when kings were kings,
Reckless, arrogant, with no moral strings,
But now they're trained,
Ordained and restrained,
By rules laid down by the lord of the rings.
(lord of the rings = general public or the subject)
Thought provoking yet realistic limerick. My pick is, Now they are trained Ordained and restrained, By rules laid down by lords of the ring? Thanks for sharing.10 points.
Thank you very much for your nice comments coupled with insightful value addition to this poem.
Very well thought and written limerick, Kings are no more kings....Lovely...10
You have absolutely nothing to learn about the construction of a limerick. I just posted a minimal tuition on limerick writing. Have you ever tried such a thing in hindi? Give us more limericks, please.
Pls.... Comment or tell any suggestions about my poem paper and the pen
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Kings were kings and these days have gone away. Very amazing Limerick shared again with thoughtful attitudes. Fantastic definitely.10
It is wonderful to have your critical comments and encouraging feedback, Kumarmani ji.