What do you say, Oh! my wandering prince?
I see you among the moving shadows
You come to me in these lines,
And pour me your unending kiss
I respond to your touch like
The sizzle when water falls on
Hot plate, I answer to your
Kiss like a flower that opens
To the sun, I reply to your moves
Like a dancer to the music,
I react to your whispers
Like a child to the mothers,
And I greet your loving looks
like that of a bride,
And I respond to your love
like a lioness on prey
The essence of it all is the striking simplicity. You are a poet. I guess that says it all. Ash (Rishi's Dad)
Superb, Scintilating......Wandering prince and the lioness*10
Just now i have read a unique comparison of love, a lioness on prey...great! ! ! a 10 for you.
Amazing composition, and passionate expression of love for the lucky 'wondering prince', , , you melt hearts of stone reshma, , , you are truly a love goddess, , a 10 from me
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I feel flattered that a poet as good as you commented on one of my pieces... The emotions you capture in this piece are true and very hard for the male nature in me to bring to paper... Wonderful