Liquid Rubies Poem by Ashton Riner

Liquid Rubies

Rating: 5.0


she's told she's not good enough
she's not loved
she's torn
what can ease her pain?
she grabs the silver
her liquid heart is spilled
onto the ground
she breathes one last breath
and closes her eyes
as her life becomes a whisper....

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lost Salley 01 September 2009

i can relate to this poem a lot...very good by the way

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Trevor Singh 13 August 2009

Wow, this is short but very intense. I like it :)

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