Little Dove Poem by Kumarmani Mahakul

Little Dove

Rating: 5.0


"Little dove! Little dove!
Are you on the tree?
Drop down, drop down
I am now free.

Little dove! Little dove!
Come and play,
Let's make doll
I have some clay."

Little dove came with
Hop, hop and hop
She said me soon
"Don't pop, pop, pop."

Both we played early
Beneath the bough,
We had a popgun
Went on, dhow, oh.

Monday, October 27, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: fun
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Dove is a bird who is advocate of peace. Here poet likes to have conversation and to play with her. Addressing little dove poet ask her where she is? He hopes she may on the tree. Poet requests her to come and play with him. Poet has some clay and they can make doll on it. Little dove come to him by hopping saying to poet not to pop. Both they played under the branches of the tree. They had a popgun with them which made sounds dhow, oh and they did departure. This is the theme of the poem and s written on this day the 27th October,2014
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Walterrean Salley 28 October 2014

The dove is one of my favorite birds. They are beautiful birds. These peaceful symbols highly visible in all societies. Thanks for this fun piece.

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Valsa George 30 October 2014

A fun rhyme which will definitely be enjoyed by children more than elders! But still enjoyed!

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Clarence Prince 30 October 2014

Little Dove Its kinda funny in parts! Thanks for sharing, Kumarmani!

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 November 2014

a rhyme ridden sweet poem meant for children poem

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 05 November 2014

a rhyme ridden sweet poem meant for children poem

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Dogma Daniman 13 June 2020

A dove bird may be little but bird is beautiful and clever. This bird moreover realizes own rights and freedom. Observing dove you have written a nice poem.

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Mahtab Bangalee 31 October 2018

beautiful poem /// like and love to read

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Edward Kofi Louis 15 March 2017

I am now free! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 09 November 2014

a nostalgic love poem well written

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 06 November 2014

peace and terror can't be together this is the gist of the poem and there a beautiful note tagged

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Kumarmani Mahakul

Kumarmani Mahakul

Gandam, Dist-Deogarh, Odisha, INDIA
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