Little Red Planet(For Scarlett) Poem by Dónall Dempsey

Little Red Planet(For Scarlett)

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Like a perfect little planet
the tiniest strawberry of ever & ever

sat in the universe
of your palm

us two
nothing but specks
(you in a blue dress)

in the middle of the hugest field
in the world

green as
Forever is.

“Eat it..! ”
you laugh
“...in one bite! ”

Offering me the little red planet
in the universe of your open hand.

I lap at it
licking up the taste of it

intensive as
the taste

of ever & ever is

the deliciousness
of your laughter

but the money
in the meter of memory

runs out

and the intenseness
of your laughter

delicious as
a little red planet

(the salty tang of your hand)

hides
once again

in the mystery of Time

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 11 June 2008

This is a wonderful piece of writing. I suppose I could say that the line breaks do disturb the reading of the lines, but the beauty of the piece is so wonderful that I hate to push the point. Greenwolfe 1962

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Scarlett Treat 09 June 2008

My youngest daughter has a strawberry birthmark on her neck, and when she was a babe, I just wanted to taste her neck, and always remember that tiny birthmark which is now covered by her long hair....and now, you have offered that tiny space of memory for me. Thanks, love, for returning it to me this way. Scarlett

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Dee Dee Wright 09 June 2008

Such a gorgeous little offering from your universe. I lapped it up! Forgive me it was delicious. I can still taste the salty tang of your skin. What a beautiful world you have created in this perfect little piece. love Dee Dee

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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