-lone Wolf- Poem by Elizabeth Tyease Collins
-lone Wolf-
A predator waits within the
depths of existance,
creeping within the conscience
of safety,
it creeps with a sense of what it
wants,
the deepest way he'll crawl and suffer
with no heart of a humans,
but of pure bred wolf.
Its tongue quenches for the blood
of the innocent,
but there's only one that he craves
for.
When he sees her in his mind
is set to oblivion,
the hair all over and stands on
edge and somewhere beneath the hate
his heart was beating.
The confusion he has reverts to
anger,
as he tears through his lies to tell
her how he truly feels,
but only the yearning to kill her
intensified each time,
every breath that he took was hesitant
because something in his heart restrained
him.
The thoughts of love in his
mind was becoming so strong
and clear,
because no matter how much
he tried to shake the feeling
it kept coming here and there,
so there he sat crounched within
the abyss of his anger,
wondering why his heart beats
once more,
for such a beautiful human
Beautiful! ...A beautiful piece....trully loved to read it......Winnie
A nice reading poem with striking images and an unusual perception.' lone wolf' waits within the depth of (human) existance and in its animalistic hunger waits for its prey to devour! But in the end the narrator vividually expressed 'Lone Wolf' human characteristics. Thanks for inviting me to read your work-this poem is noneless than a 10
Interesting original poem very done in the shadows of our minds+++++10 regards
Your poem is a delving probe into the human psyche and what drives some males and individuals. The wolf is actually a very socially organized animal with the dominant alpha male and female in a social hierarchy, but wolves have had a bad rap for centuries. I did the wolf preying upon victims lines also in 'A Season Of Growth', a viking epic, which is not on line. Enjoyed the read.
i like this it is well written with the same style of writing that i use so i like it and can relate to it even more. tell me if im wrong is it about love or hate cause im thinking its about love for some one but you dont want to love them but your heart says other wise im i right? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? i like it though it reminds me of what i wrote in ''WHEN LOVE FAILS'' when u get a chance check it out and tell me what u think of it.
yea, , , , , , , , , good poetry.. write toward the light.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Great job on the poem. The wolf is my favourite animal. :)