Long Awaited Saint Poem by DAVID GERARDINO

Long Awaited Saint

Rating: 5.0


PEASANTS transfixed in a botttomless pit,
the breath of the brethren turns into
spit , then a evil snake.
THE bride steps forward like a cherubim
in white, then the weapon tossed aside,
and in its place, one man, one world, one
long awaited saint.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Duncan Wyllie 23 May 2006

This is a wonderful piece of poetry from the top draw, A really class act love Duncan

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REVELATIONS...JOHN...THE 7 SEALS...AND DAVID PUTS IT ALL VERY NICELY INTO ONE CREATIVE CAPSULE....NICE WORK... SEVERAL YEARS AGO I GOT INVENTIVE(my good years) , and composed my own adaptation on armegeddon, using the scripts of St, John The Evangelist as resource & inspiration...You got me thinkin' 'bout bringin' that work out from the attic...tis quite long though...more of a short story, than prose...OK...I'M BACK IN MY COMMENT TO YOU...GREAT PENNING & THANKS FOR BATTIN' SOME UNUSED GREY MATTER BACK INTO THE MOTIVATIONAL MODE...FRANK

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