Captain Cur

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Long Past The Longing Hour, Love Poems - Poem by Captain Cur

Long past the longing hour
as the shades of you drape my sullen frame
I have emptied all into you
and washed you with my breath.

You left long before that hour
to retrace your steps back to a former life
that is no more to you

mere inflections of emotions lost long
as you walk that familiar path
or the one leading you back to me.

Comments about Long Past The Longing Hour, Love Poems by Captain Cur

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (5/25/2013 6:07:00 PM)

    I am reading into this poem, and you are saying a lot. Your last stanza tells the story. nice ink. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 4,678 Points Valerie Dohren (8/29/2012 9:56:00 AM)

    So romantic - a lovely write. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 29, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, August 29, 2012

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