Look Beyond Poem by Robert Siney

Look Beyond

Rating: 5.0


Beyond the dead pan face,
Lies a heart that lacks pace,
A mind that longs to stimulate,
A smile that cannot compensate.

What you see is just pretense,
A mask, a shadow, to make amends,
Unintentional but certainly strong,
Too busy playing your own slow song.

Lost and confused without knowing why,
Easier to laugh than it is to cry,
Invisibility is reality today,
Out of the picture, out of the way.

The silence has never been so loud,
Self-inflicted, no fault of the crowd,
Oblivious minds but maybe that’s how,
It’s appreciated and accepted by him now.

Beneath the surface of the sea,
Sits an unbroken sensitivity,
Astride a lonely sense of dignity,
All these things you never knew about me.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
David 23 July 2018

Good poem

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David 23 July 2018

Good poem

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Alison Cassidy 25 October 2008

A reflective poem about personal angst and the thoughts that arise when the troubled mind is takes over. I guess we all wear masks now and then, but it's a pity when the mask becomes the only reality. I sense a generous heart lies behind your words. Good write. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

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Marilyn Lott 23 October 2008

This is a very heartfelt poem about feelings inside oneself. We don't know everything about a person for we cannot see inside. Well written Robert. A '10! ' from me. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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